Jane Eyre and Space Opera

I'm taking a short break in the middle of my mid morning writing. I woke up a little early and was doing some dishes while listening to my Jane Eyre audiobook.

When I sat down to write on one of my current projects the writing came out a little funny. This is only a first draft so I'm not going to change it just now but my characters are talking and acting a little strangely today. See below:

“Are you sure that you can offer this? You’re sure that your Aunt will allow it?” She studied Jundi’s facial features searching for anything to show evidence that her new prospects were not to be. 

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